Read my transfer essay?

<p>Hey guys, </p>

<p>I am applying as a junior transfer to Cornell and the application is due in 2 days. Is anyone willing to read my essay and let me know if anything needs to be changed? I'll PM it to you. Thanks a lot.</p>

<p>I don't want this to sound personal but I probably won't send it to people with low post counts as I do not want this essay misused in one way or another.</p>