Read my Transfer essay!

Hey guys! I was hoping someone could read my essay and give me feedback. Prompt is below and I’ll Pm to anyone who is interested…

Prompt: Please tell us more about your interest in transferring. Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply? (300 word limit).

I transferred to Brown last year and am here to give back. Feel free to PM me with any other questions as well.