Read my UC app essays?

UC essays, for people not too familiar, have a 350 word limit. I’ve done 3 of the 4 essays required. I’m applying to all the UCs except Merced and Riverside, and my top school is UC San Diego (realistically considering that I won’t be accepted to UCLA or Berkeley being a pretty average student). I want solid essays, but I’m not going for Ivy League material, of course. A quick read and suggested edits would be very helpful and appreciated. If anyone is interested (and is not sketchy lol), please message me and I can shoot you a Google Docs link. Thanks!

Same here. Except I only wrote 2 out of 4. If anyone could give me suggestions please send me a message.

@Cocohorse I wouldnt mind taking a look. just send me a PM

@TunisianToUSA I wouldnt mint taking a look. just send me a PM.

@TunisianToUSA Hi, do you want to try exchanging essays and giving each other feedback?
@kaiouji1 Thanks, will do.

@kaiouji1 could you look at my leadership essay too?

@kaiouji1 ok I will send you a message thanks
@Cocohorse yes good idea let’s do that