<p>I'd really appreciate it if someone would be willing to take a look at my prompt 2 essay and give me some feedback/comments etc.
I tried to adapt one of my other essays for this question so I would also like an opinion on if you think I answered the question completely and clearly enough or if I'm missing anything major.
Just PM me if you're willing to and I'll send it to you, thanks!</p>
<p>Oh and for anyone who is unaware, the prompt is:
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>
<p>Hey. I would be willing to look over it for you. I need mines to be revised too, can you return the favor?</p>