Read my UMich Supplement Essay? Please!

<p>Would anyone like to read my University of Michigan supplement essay? It is the second prompt, I will mail it in the PM. PLEASE tear it apart, I am a math guy.. terrible at this writing stuff. THANKS IN ADVANCE!!!</p>

<p>Ill give it a read</p>

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<p>PM me. I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>PM me, I can give you a few pointers.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Ill read it. PM it over</p>

<p>If you still need more readers then I am willing to read it and give you a few pointers!</p>

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