Read my unorthodox Yale essay?

<p>Hey guys.. I'm taking a risk with my essay by writing it in an unconventional manner.</p>

<p>Can someone please read and comment on my essay?</p>

<p>Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>i’ll read yours if u read mine</p>

<p>you got me. i’m interested.</p>

<p>but tell me what you think of my previous post about that similie</p>

<p>sure, I’ll give it a read…I already applied to Yale!!!</p>

<p>PM yours over we can trade. I’m not doing Yale tho ._.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>sure pm it over.</p>