Read my "Why Duke" Essay?

<p>Hello CC community, I've just recently written a draft for my "Why Duke" essay and I would really appreciate some feedback on it, especially from current students at Duke who also wrote this supplement.</p>

<p>Please be brutally honest! I feel as though it has a good message and the right conviction, but needs work in terms of the specific things Duke offers. Any help would be much appreciated, thanks!</p>

<p>Hey! I am a Duke applicant too but already has submitted the Duke supplement (I swear) for the sake of getting an interview . I think i can help you with your essay. ;)</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it if you’d like, as I already submitted my duke app (didn’t write the optional Duke essay, though haha).</p>

<p>I will (junior, but I love Duke and have spent three summers on campus).</p>

<p>I’d be willing to look at your essay! I was deferred, waitlisted then denied by Duke. So take that how you want, but I’d be more than willing to help!</p>

<p>I’ll read your essay! I got into Penn ED so I don’t need to apply to any more colleges :)</p>

<p>PM me. I’m not applying this year.</p>

<p>PM me if you would like some honest criticism</p>

<p>sure 10char</p>

<p>I can take a look at it PM me. I’m a good reader I’ll give you a good and speedy response.</p>