<p>Hi, I just want to know if any of you can show me your essay, I want to read some essays before I sent mine in, ok thank you and I appreciate it.</p>
<p>I'm not sure what you ask is fair. You're new here, and people have no way of knowing that you won't abuse their kindness. I don't mean to suggest that you would do anything wrong, but I want you to understand why people may not be willing to do as you ask, even if they are kind. </p>
<p>As an aside, reading other essays might not help you much. You want your essay to be unique and characteristic of you. Reading other essays could hinder that.</p>
<p>If you want to read essays, purchase a book with essays that got into harvard. I think it's more useful if you have US read your essays and give comments.</p>
<p>yeah i guess ur right, alrite, thanks anyways.</p>
<p>Or maybe you can look for people who wants to have their essays read. You can PM them, read over it, critique or whatever and then get a sense of how you might want to write yours.</p>
<p>wish i could help, but i haven't really done mine yet. but i just wanted to say don't worry. i completely understand where you're coming from ;] </p>
<p>good luck!</p>
<p>Do a google search for sample college essays. Should be some around lying around the internet.</p>