<p>I didnt cry when i watched the Titanic. I held my tears when William shouted Freeedom from his braveheart. But I cried when writting this essay because its my story.</p>
<p>It's extremely personal and very risky, and I want some feedbacks within a day. So anyone who can critique really quickly is welcomed. The essay is not polished, and im an intl student.(you might want to put more enphasis on grammar/structure, etc..)</p>
<p>thank you very much. im worrying.</p>
<p>OOOH YES!! PM it over PLEASE!!!!!!! I need a good cry and I'm a good editor and English nerd...</p>
<p>I'd like to read it.</p>
<p>I'll read it =]</p>
<p>I want to read it, too.</p>
<p>anyone else, plz?</p>
<p>I'll read it then. =]</p>
<p>I don't mind, but I'm an 09er</p>
<p>PM it here and I would be more than happy to read, provide feedback, and help with grammar and the like! : )</p>
<p><em>bump</em>
10</p>
<p>I'll read it for you; it sounds interesting. Plus I'm good with grammar as well :)</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>i am glad to take a look at it~</p>
<p>yeah.. i would very glad to</p>
<p>thank you guys
anyone else who can critique within hours/minutes?</p>
<p>You didn't cry when you watched Titanic? WHAT KIND OF A PERSON ARE YOU???</p>
<p>Heh. I'll read. I can do minutes, if you want.</p>
<p>I'd love to read.
PM me :)</p>
<p>Sounds fascinating. I'll have a look...</p>
<p>please respond!
i've been waiting in front of my PC for hours....:(</p>
<p>i'll read it too!</p>