<p>Would someone please read my Common App Personal Influence Essay? Its 600ish words, and I also want to use this for Princeton's essay. Since the instructions say "about 500 words," I figure I'm safe at my current size?</p>
<p>While advice is greatly appreciated, more than that even I want to gauge what the reader's response to my content is, since the person I chose certainly has an unusual story. </p>
<p>Any feedback is welcome =)</p>
<p>PM me I will be happy to look it over for you.</p>
<p>sure i'd love to...PM it over</p>
<p>pm me. I will try to help you</p>
<p>sure no prob...PM me</p>
<p>I'll try my best to revise your essay. PM me.</p>
<p>I would love to read it. Thanks!</p>
<p>PM me, and I'll read/critique it for you!</p>
<p>i'll read it. pm me</p>
<p>I'd be glad to read your essay if you want</p>
<p>I'll read. :)</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>PM me and I will take a look. I'll PM you back.</p>
<p>i'll read it PM me</p>