Readers for Common App #1?

[Colossal19]

Would anyone be willing to provide feedback on my Prompt #1 essay for the Common App? I’ll PM if so. Thanks.

[OneMata]

Sure.

[Stanfordplz]

PM me.

[Steak99]

Pm me

[bezabefekadu]

PM me

[collegebobollege]

Sure, PM me