Readers for Common App Essay?

<p>I wanted some extra critique of my common app essays (personal statement and activity) so if any of you are interested leave a comment and I'll PM. Im mainly concerned that they are not memorable/personal enough - maybe don't dive deep enough or aren't unique to me. Thanks.</p>

<p>bump…anyone?</p>

<p>I’ll read your essay if you want. PM me.</p>