<p>Hey y'all! I got deferred from my EA school but that's alright! I'm focusing on putting my best foot forward for my other apps. I was examining my CA essay and not sure if it's quite potraying the traits I like/might sound forced. Grateful to any potential readers, but high post count would be nice :) If you could provide some specific comments rather than "sounds good/sounds weak" that would also be helpful, but really any feedback is great! Let me know and I'll PM you.</p>
<p>send it over</p>
<p>PM me :)</p>