Really need help on personal essay

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Is anyone willing to read my essay if i pm it?</p>

<p>Not concerned with grammar as much as if this is what adcoms are looking for. I think I may have actually missed the whole point of the question since it doesn’t say a ton about me like other essays I have read. Should I take it in another direction?</p>

<p>Please be honest!</p>

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<p>I will, most definitely.</p>

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<p>i will look at it</p>

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<p>Sure! send it to me!</p>

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<p>PM me as well</p>