<p>This is a very personal essay so I would really like if people can read and proofread/give tips. Thanks.</p>
<p>I can, if you want.</p>
<p>Just sent it in an pm. Sorry if the formatting is a little off. Anyone else want to read it?</p>
<p>Sure, pm it to me.</p>
<p>anyone else? due in 3 days!</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>please, really need help</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read over it.</p>
<p>Thanks vincent! just need one more read over</p>