<p>I just whipped this up really quickly... I would love for some advice on it and proof reading! Thanks for everything!</p>
<p>ill read it if you want</p>
<p>Anyone else want to read it? Thanks!</p>
<p>I would read it, but if I see a flood of grammar mistakes I will stop reading half-way through, and you will get a message along the lines of “The number of grammar mistakes does not justify my reading any further; fix them, send it to me, and I will offer some advice then.” So, if it is “really” rough, do not bother contacting me until you have at least made an attempt to edit yourself.</p>
<p>I’ll give you feedback, PM me!</p>
<p>Hahaha it’s not that rough. It’s just I feel like it’s missing something… Anyways, would anyone else like to read?</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM w/ the prompt.</p>
<p>I can give you feedbacks.</p>
<p>Ill read it</p>
<p>i would like to read it. send it to me :)</p>
<p>PM me plz I will comment</p>
<p>I basically overhauled my essay from the first few readers 
Thanks for the help guys! It’s really starting to come together! I sent out the updated version to a few people!</p>
<p>i’ll check it</p>
<p>I’ll take a look</p>