<p>I have already made a complete overhaul of my personal statement since being rejected, and sincerely believe that this essay is much, much better than my old one. However, I want other people's opinions of it. If you comment below (VV) I will PM it to you.</p>
<p>Thank you so much!!</p>
<p>P.S. I'm really striving to be accepted to a school like UVa or Duke, so I would really really appreciate it if you looked at my essay harshly. Thank agaiN!</p>
<p>Don’t disclose to anyone random.</p>
<p>Hey. Send me a PM and I’ll look it over. Make sure to include the prompt and your e-mail so I can send it back w/ comments.</p>
<p>bump10char</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>If you are not applying to CALS, then feel free to send it to me and I’ll take a look. </p>
<p>I’m applying to CALS so I don’t want to see anyone else’s CALS essay or I may unconsciously steal the entire thing.</p>
<p>thanks dude! i didn’t apply to CALS, but it doesnt matter anyway because this is my personal statement. Ill PM it to u!</p>
<p>Can you PM your essay to me.</p>
<p>PM it to me, I’d love to read it!!</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll send back notes :)</p>
<p>Lets do it.</p>