<p>Hi so I choose the first Common Application essay prompt witch is share a story that is central to your identity. I wanted to write about Buddhism. I already wrote most of my essay but am now starting to question if it was the right choice. I do not anywhere in my essay preach my beliefs. I talk about how meditation and studying Buddhist philosophies helped me get through high school stress and helped me make a connection with the world. I tried to frame it more as a philosophy rather then religion. I am applying to George Washington and American with a International Relations major so I also tried to talk about how Buddhism helped shaped my world view. Is this appropriate for a college essay and more ideally is there anything you could recommend that would make the subject less controversial. I really think this is a necessary part of me and should be included in my application so I really want this to work</p>
<p>Thank you in advance.</p>