Revealing Myself through Someone else - Did I make it work?

College Essays
1

<p>No it's not the person who has affected my life the most.
Any takers on reading my essay and telling me what you think - it's less than 500 words :P</p>

2

<p>sure, i’ll read it for you. im an 09-er though. if you’re uncomfortable, it’s fine.</p>

3

<p>I’ll read it too. I’m also an 09er.</p>

4

<p>I will read it, too, also an 09
but finished my essay and ED app</p>