Review/edit my essay please!

College Essays
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<p>Hello, I am currently working on my Common App Essay and I know that it is far from being done so I would appreciate any suggestions. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Is anyone interested?</p>

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<p>ME :slight_smile:
do you mind reading mine too?</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to edit too</p>

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<p>I’ll review it. Just pm it to me</p>

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<p>OK I pmed you all. Harvardhottie I’ll read yours if you want</p>

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<p>Ok I edited the essay is anyone interested?</p>

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<p>I am :slight_smile: PM me</p>

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<p>pm me too :D</p>

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<p>Interested pm me</p>

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<p>hey i don’t mind giving feedback if you’d still like?</p>

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<p>Send it to me.</p>

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<p>send it to me :)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it over. :)</p>

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<p>Certainly, pm me :)</p>