<p>Hey, so I know the AP art studio deadline isn't for a while, but it's never too soon to get a critique! So will you look at my work so far and tell me if I'm heading in the right direction? Thank you!</p>
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<p>Wow, this is impressive!</p>
<p>bump? I would really like some feedback on which are the strongest for quality and if there’s anything I could do to strengthen my portfolio.</p>
<p>In your breadth, I really like the mark-making on the violin piece, and the one with the cubes has nice values. From your concentration, the bird/fish one has interesting negative space.
I would definitely show more variety in your breadth - add some paintings, landscapes, etc.
Hope that helps~</p>