Review my Common App essay

Hi! I will be submitting my essay to the colleges soon.

I would really appreciate a second opinion on my essay.
Can anyone review/comment on my essay if I pm it to you?

Thanks!

pm me

I’m also in the same position as you are - if you don’t care about that, pm me! I’ve had a stranger help as well so just paying it forward, haha.

PM me! :slight_smile: