<p>Would y'all be willing to read my essay and offer any comments or suggestions for improvement? It is for "Topic of your choice" on commonapp.</p>
<p>Bump? It is on a controversial topic (religion).</p>
<p>I will. Just PM me.</p>
<p>i’ll read it for you. email it to me. sanabella</p>
<p>ill read it. pm me</p>
<p>ill read it pm me it</p>
<p>I will edit for content and grammar if you PM me.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t submit an essay on a controversial topic like this. You never know what views the admissions counselor that’s reading it has. It may affect your admission.</p>
<p>I didn’t bash the religion or anything like that. I simply explained a philosophical “journey” of sorts and how that led me in a different direction. Should I reconsider submitting an essay like this?</p>