Review my essay, plz?

<p>If you would like to volunteer, I'll PM it to you so you can take a look and give your comments. I would just post it up normally, but one is never sure on the internet.</p>

<p>sure, pm it to me.</p>

<p>Sure, PM it to me!</p>

<p>Sure, I'll help!</p>

<p>I would like to read it. PM it to me.</p>

<p>Thx for the help, the PMs are sent</p>

<p>Will you PM it to me?</p>

<p>ill read it pm me</p>

<p>u can pm it to me if you'd like.</p>

<p>pm me, please</p>

<p>i'll read it. just pm me.</p>