<p>I just finished my essay. I need people to tell me if its good or not and if there are any grammar errors. English is my second language it would really help if somebody reviews it. Anybody?</p>
<p>sure.............................</p>
<p>Check you inbox tomhls123. I just PMed you</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>PMed iPhone</p>
<p>bump.................</p>
<p>i ll read too</p>
<p>heyy i would be glad to help =)</p>