Review my essay?

<p>I'll send it to you if you want to look it over.</p>

<p>The only reason why I am so worried is that my AP Lit teacher completely flipped my writing strategy and now I feel my essay is droll and not specific to the degree I wanted it.</p>

<p>I realize that essays can be from anything like socks to volunteering, but I just wanted some feedback outside one person that has hundreds of students to look over.</p>

<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>

<p>this is my common app essay, if anyone was wondering.</p>

<p>i'm just looking for solid feedback and how to improve.</p>

<p>I'll read it. It will help me procrastinate because I don't feel like doing my bio work...</p>

<p>sure pm pmpmpmpmpmpmpmpm</p>

<p>pm me it and ill critique it (08er)</p>

<p>woops sorry once again..ill send it to some more.</p>

<p>Musab, I'd love to look it over if you don't mind...? =]</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>