<p>I'll send it to you if you want to look it over.</p>
<p>The only reason why I am so worried is that my AP Lit teacher completely flipped my writing strategy and now I feel my essay is droll and not specific to the degree I wanted it.</p>
<p>I realize that essays can be from anything like socks to volunteering, but I just wanted some feedback outside one person that has hundreds of students to look over.</p>
<p>Yes, please PM it to me, and if you could, tell me the college you have in mind. I feel that the strength of the essay varies with what colleges an applicant is applying to.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>