<p>I'm answering the second prompt (what someone has expressed that's meaningful to you) because it seems quite similar to one of the prompts for the common application, so I just revised a bit. It's still too long, tho. And I need to see if my tone sounds too stilted or pretentious...Would anyone be interested in reading it? Doesn't matter if you're applying as well or not.</p>
<p>Thanx in advance!</p>
<p>PM me, I'll read it.</p>
<p>sure! PM please. :)</p>
<p>I'll read. That was my favorite essay (I used it on common app too!)</p>
<p>I'll be glad to. I reply with comments within 24 hours!</p>
<p>PM me as well. I'd love to help you out!</p>
<p>pm me ill try and help out</p>
<p>hey, PM me, i'd like to give it a read</p>
<p>just PM me and i will be happy to read it! =)</p>
<p>Sure! I'd love to look it over! Pm me :)</p>
<p>Ditto! *10 char</p>
<p>PM me, I'll read it</p>
<p>I'll read it... :-)</p>
<p>thepapercrane, I think you disabled your private messaging...</p>
<p>I'll hook you up with some advice if you want any. PM me.</p>
<p>I can read it too if you don't have enough help already. LOL</p>
<p>Send a PM over</p>
<p>I like reading all the feedback, especially since they're so varied! It's making me rethink what I want the message of the essay to be and just how to achieve that to a wider audience. I'd love to be reviewed more.</p>
<p>PM me and I'll be happy to read and comment! :-)</p>
<p>if you want a 2948th reader, </p>
<p>pm me :)</p>