Review my Stanford what matters essay.

[musicislife23]

<p>I just finished it lol and i'll appreciate it if someone could review it. I'll pm it to you. Thanks!</p>

[muaythaiguy2]

<p>This reminds me of what Northstarmom wrote:</p>

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If you have asked CC members to read your essays, your chances of admission to Harvard are probably less than 1 in 100 because your behavior here indicates you lack the confidence and critical thinking skills that Harvard seeks. This is true even if someone on CC predicted you’d easily be accepted or said that your essay was amazing.

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<p>If you want the mechanics of your essay edited, ask your English teacher.</p>