Review my UCF Personal statements?

College Essays
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Hello and I apologize in advance if I’m doing something wrong in posting this; I’m a long time lurker, but this is my first post in the forums or any online forum for that matter.

I just finished my UCF personal statements (first college essay) and I wanted to know if someone on here would be willing to read over and criticize my essay. Any help would be appreciated!

Thanks in advance!

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Would also like someone to read mine, just the beginning and tell me their thoughts. So me.

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@austin98 @Malcomx99 Haha, generally people make their own new threads for asking for help, Malcolm. But I can read both of yours if you’d like. Just private message me.

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Yes. I love reading essays!

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I’ll read. I’m probably applying to UCF as a transfer but PM me.

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I’ll read it.