Review my villanova supplement essay?

<p>Can someone please review and critique my villanova supplement essay? no 2015ers, sorry. </p>

<p>The prompt:One of the core values of Villanova, as an Augustinian university founded on the teachings of St. Augustine, is that students and faculty learn from each other. As you imagine yourself as a member of the Villanova community, what is one lesson that you have learned in your life that you will want to share with others?</p>

<p>Thanks!:)</p>

<p>bump anyone?</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>