Review on a College Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys,</p>

<p>I would like someone to give me advice on my college essay, and I want to know how I can improve it, is there anyone who'd like to read it?
Prompt: Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Go ahead and PM it to me. I’ll proofread it and give you some guidance.</p>

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<p>i would like to read it as well.</p>

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<p>I can do some constructive criticism. Feel free to PM me!!</p>