<p>I submitted my transfer application to Penn a long time ago, but I was just hoping that someone would be willing to look over my second essay and give me their opinion of it. Anyone?</p>
<p>I'll give it a try, sure.</p>
<p>it doesn't fit in a PM, what's your email?</p>
<p>I dont mind reading it. You can send half of it in one pm and another in a second pm if you want.</p>
<p>isnt' it not common courtesy to reply when someone sends you their essay in a PM or email, after you've consented to critique it. I only say this because its happened to me several times already. Just makes me think that someone is using my essay...</p>