Revise my short essay (379 words) PLEASE!

College Essays
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<p>I am a bad writer.. I think I have problems with grammer and the content.</p>

<p>Can anyone help me with my essay please??</p>

<p>The prompt is:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

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<p>If you can get it to me tonight I can look at it quickly; if not, it may take a while. I’d be glad to look at it</p>

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<p>yo this is the UC application essay…
I can help out!</p>

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<p>I can look at it!</p>

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<p>send it over</p>