Revised essay (practically complete - just need feedback!)

[xxmademoiselle]

<p>I've revised my essay and now it's close to 500 words. Woohoo, go me! Now all I need are some incredibly insightful and helpful people to read it and tell me what they think (actually, insight is not a requirement, just the ability to read :P). Thanks!</p>

[kc_lady]

<p>I'll read it. PM it to me.</p>

[system]

<p>I'll read it. PM?</p>

[deliciousgeek]

<p>PM me too!!!!</p>

[stevenlee87]

<p>I'll read & comment on it</p>

[sljaeger]

<p>pm it to me</p>

[altf4]

<p>i'll read it....and comment</p>

[drinkingmilkalldaylong]

<p>all right...i'll read it.</p>