Revised Johns Hopkins ED Essay!! One week left!

College Essays
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<p>hi
i posted the same thread before. but i changed and revised my essay alot.
but i think it still needs more revisions. so for those who already reviewed my essay, if u would like to give me another feedback, ill appreciate it.</p>

<p>im Johns Hopkins ED applicant. deadline-11/15</p>

<p>good feedback please!!</p>

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<p>Ohhhh...! I'm applying ED...do you want to read my second one and I'll give some feedback on yours?</p>

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<p>ill give it a read..</p>

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<p>ill read your new one again email is <a href="mailto:yoonex@gmail.com">yoonex@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>i can help too</p>

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<p>ill read, and i can get back to you within a day. pm or email me.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I can help.
Please send to me.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>sure id be happy to critique</p>