<p>I had to write a college essay for an English class earlier in the year. Just wanted to see if anyone wanted to read/revise it, give me some feedback as to how it is. It's a very rough draft, and I plan on fixing it more once I get some feedback.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to look it over if you still need. =]</p>
<p>sure, pm me :)</p>
<p>love to read it!</p>
<p>hahah,pm me :)</p>
<p>Thanks! I’ll be PMing it over now. Sorry for the huge bump & long delay. I’ve been busy this weekend/week.</p>
<p>I would love to read it, and give back some advice.</p>
<p>Thanks, I appreciate it. I PM’ed it over to you. </p>
<p>Anyone else willing to give some feedback? You’re welcome to criticize my writing. Be harsh and critical with it. I’m open to any sort of feedback.
Thanks</p>