REVISION FOR APPEAL LETTER

hello!
I would like to get all the help I can to make sure my appeal letter is everything I can offer. I do not want to post the letter online, just because plagiarism is a possibility.
Is there anyone who can help giving feedback and revisions to my letter? I sort of am having a mental block currently and do not know what my next step is. I am unable to send PMS as I just joined :frowning: Thank you.

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