rip apart a common app essay! :)

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<p>I need some really harsh criticism for my essay. I'm at the second draft and it still needs improvement. So, if you want to relieve any stress by murdering an essay, I'll PM it to you. :D</p>

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<p>I want to relieve some stress, PM it over =D</p>