rip my essay to shreds?

Applying to College
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<p>Could someone read my essay? I'm worried it might be too autobiographical, non-literary, and/or pompous, and I'd really appreciate it if someone helped me edit it. Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure, i'll help.</p>

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<p>try me. i'll look it over</p>

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<p>Thanks! I'll PM you.</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>i'll read too, just pm me :)</p>

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<p>I'll definitely take a look at it and give you soem good advice.</p>

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<p>Id love to readit</p>

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<p>thanks! I'll PM all of you.</p>

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<p>Happy to help. (:
PM me.</p>

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<p>I want to help as well!</p>

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<p>I would love to read it!</p>

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<p>send it over, and I'll rip it apart beyond recognition...kiddin</p>

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<p>me, i love ripping essays :)</p>

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<p>ill do it pm me</p>

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<p>id be happy to read it, pm me</p>

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<p>thanks again!</p>