Rip up my common application essay please

<p>could anyone take a look at it? I think it's pretty polished now but probably not done yet. Don't worry about being too harsh in your comments.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>email it to me as an attachment-- <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>i’ll take a look!</p>

<p>I will critique your essay…pm me…also if you want could you please read my essay for review.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. PM it to me.</p>

<p>PM me … I will take a look</p>

<p>ok
PM it over.</p>

<p>Sure pm it over or e-mail: <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>

<p>ill take a look pm me</p>

<p>I’m willing. PM me.</p>

<p>If you PM it over I’ll give it a read through.</p>

<p>mail me the essay, I’d be glad to rip it up and mail it back to you.</p>