Rising Senior, Cornell A&S Supplement Essay

<p>Hey, so I've been trying to get as much of my common app/supplement essays done before senior year starts as possible. I'm applying ED to Cornell and just finished the first draft of my supplement essay for the college of arts and science. The prompt is:
"Describe your intellectual interests, their evolution, and what makes them exciting to you. Tell us how you will utilize the academic programs in the College of Arts and Sciences to further explore your interests, intended major, or field of study."</p>

<p>If anyone would be interested in reading my first draft/possibly editing it since its 546 words, I would be very grateful.</p>

<p>Ill PM the essay to anyone who wants to help out</p>

<p>Sure, I’d love to read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

<p>Sure, I’d love to have a look :)</p>