RISKY Common App essay/may inspire you?

College Essays
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<p>Could someone pretty please look over my essay. My counseler said it was top notch but I just wanted a second opinion.
I'll evaluate yours too!
Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>

<p>I use an analogy that's central to my beliefs blah blah, I think you may like it! PM me or tell me if you would like to read it!
THANKS FOR REAL</p>

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<p>yes, i’d like to read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I would like to read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look! And if you could edit mine in return, that’d be cool. (:</p>

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<p>I love reading essays, currently going to UCLA. =)</p>

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<p>OMg my essay’s risky too. I’ll take a look at yours if you’ll take a look at my UChicago essay!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read</p>

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<p>I can help</p>