<p>Anyone up for reading my risky common app essay? It's not too conventional and I've been told it's a hit or miss by more than one person...</p>
<p>I'd like strong readers too to give general comments or critiques. Honestly, if I MUST rewrite the essay or think of a new topic, I would. But let me know what you guys think.</p>
<p>Applying to:
Brown ED
UPenn
Duke
Vanderbilt</p>
<p>with this.</p>
<p>ill give it a shot...</p>
<p>I'll read, PM it to me.</p>
<p>send it over. i will read</p>
<p>Glad to critique.</p>
<p>I can give you feedback by tomorrow. =) I'd Editor in Chief of my school newspaper so I'm pretty darn good at giving feedback on writing - lots of practice!</p>
<p>Full Disclosure: I am an '09er, but I am finished with my Common App essay. It's on the topic "describe someone who has influenced you." I'm applying Amherst ED.</p>
<p>you can PM me if you like, I will read it over and give some feedbacks by tmr if it's fine with you</p>
<p>Will love to help critique the essay. PM me.</p>
<p>Disclaimer: I'm an 09er but not applying to any of those schools (except for maybe Brown, but not ED-ing it)</p>
<p>sure i can give it a go.</p>