Risky Essay - Feedback

Colleges & Universities A-Z Massachusetts Institute of Technology
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<p>hey i just became a member because I wanted to see if anyone would like to read my long essay and give me some serious feedback (yeah, I know it's due in a few days) and not just someone who will read my essay and junk it (or even worse to steal it!). MIT has always been a reach school for me (I've got a relatively good safety school), and I wrote a very personal essay with a risky subject - I don't need comments or opinions on my subject - I am okay with the risk I'm taking. I just want feedback on the technical aspect of a college essay - flow, structure, impact, etc.</p>

<p>Preferably someone else who is also applying to MIT, and I'd be able to give feedback on your essay as well.</p>

<p>If you are genuinely interested, please PM me and include your e-mail address!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it :)</p>

<p>saliktheblank "AT" comcast.net</p>

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<p>pm me. </p>

<p><a href="mailto:lunaedraconis@gmail.com">lunaedraconis@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>And, erm, are you a debater? The whole "flow/structure/impact" thing made me wonder...</p>

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<p>haha, i am actually. didn't think about that, since it's in an entirely different context</p>

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<p>I'll read it. Applied to MIT EA, but I'm curious.</p>

<p>chaos.flame AT gmail DOT com</p>

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<p>yea, ill check it out, i already got accepted into my ea school but also am applying to mit so yeah</p>

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<p>sure...ill check it out.</p>

<p>i already got accepted EA as well.</p>

<p>PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. Either pm me or email me at: adnan(dot)esmail(at)gmail(dot)com</p>