<p>Hi, I wrote a rough draft and need feedback, ASAP, b/c Stanford is due this Friday!!!</p>
<p>Post in this topic and I will PM you the essay if you so desire to help out.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>BTW, if you wouldn't mind, I will also include my two other short ones for feedback also b/c I don't know what to change to make it better, but if I decided to give feedback on one, I don't mind at all.</p>
<p>i'll read them</p>
<p>I can help you out</p>
<p>if ya still needz some help im rite here.</p>
<p>pm me if you want additional feedback</p>
<p>pm me if you want</p>
<p>I can also help</p>