Rough Draft: Common App Essay and Short Answer

<p>Hey CC'ers,</p>

<p>I have rough drafts of my Common App. essay (584 words) and short answer (150 words). I would appreciate some feedback from experienced users (Please post your credentials as I don't want some other high schooler taking any of my ideas). I'm applying to some highly selective schools. I don't want to sound selfish, but please only respond if you're older (i.e. in college or graduated) and know what you're talking about regarding college admissions.</p>

<p>Just respond if you want to read one or both. I'll PM them over. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Bump. Anyone, please?</p>

<p>I’ll read either if you want.</p>

<p>i’ll read it</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I appreciate the offers, but considering all three of you are applying to schools this year as well, I don’t know if I feel comfortable handing out my essay to feelow 2015’ers. Thanks for the offer, though.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. I’m in med school…</p>