Rough essay for Umich and UCs PLEASE READ!!

<p>so for UMich im gonna cut it down somehow to close to 500words.
i just finished this up this morning and really need some help with it!
can someone read it?? it's one the "setback" essays..
thanks ahead of time.</p>

<p>i'll be glad to help</p>

<p>I'll be glad to read it. YOu can PM me.</p>

<p>okay i PMed both of you guys. thank you soooooo much!</p>