Rushed Essay Problems!

Hiya there! I had to submit my Common Application essay earlier than I would have liked to some schools because of the QuestBridge finalist application deadline, and I was wondering if someof you helpful CC frequenters would mind reading over my essay and assessing it briefly. No major edits are necessary on your part (unless you feel inclined to) and I know it won’t change the fact that the essay I sent is, well, the essay I sent, but it will help me edit it before submitting other colleges applications!

If you want to swap with me, I’ll read yours if you read mine! (Already submitted EA)

@ShawnLooch yeah that sounds great! I’ll PM you later today

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Okay. Send.