<p>Too many useless adjectives</p>
<p>"The corruption that we are undergoing?" Trash.</p>
<p>"We see in other people our flaws?" Try "We see our flaws in other people."</p>
<p>I'll edit this as I come up with more.</p>
<p>Too many useless adjectives</p>
<p>"The corruption that we are undergoing?" Trash.</p>
<p>"We see in other people our flaws?" Try "We see our flaws in other people."</p>
<p>I'll edit this as I come up with more.</p>