Santa Clara Transfer Admissions Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi there!
I am applying as a transfer student to Santa Clara University as a management student. I was previously at another Jesuit university in Seattle and was not happy, so I am returning to sunny California! I have a strong high school/college transcript along with extracurriculars. </p>

<p>Would anyone mind taking a look at my essay and give me some tips?</p>

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<p>Hello. Send your essay to me.</p>

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<p>I can help if you want.</p>

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<p>I sent the essay to you. Thank you</p>